Ok so i'm totally pumped that i got a comment from someone i actually don't know! Thank you so much Srndpty! I hope you leave more comments in the future. Also if a publisher comes across this website leave a phone number and an email adresses please! It woudl be a dream to be published! Thank you to everyone who will ever read my poems or who already has!
JJ
Saturday, December 29, 2007
More Gossip and Drama
Ok so here is some more of gossip and drama poem...
he does drugs!
"she actually gave him a hug!"
I aced my interview.
I got new shoes!
Your not my friend anymore
but you swore!
Drama and gossip,
feelings and hearts.
She moved away and he broke my heart.
ok not as good as the first one but it still works. Leave a comment.
he does drugs!
"she actually gave him a hug!"
I aced my interview.
I got new shoes!
Your not my friend anymore
but you swore!
Drama and gossip,
feelings and hearts.
She moved away and he broke my heart.
ok not as good as the first one but it still works. Leave a comment.
Thursday, December 27, 2007
Gossip and drama
so here's some of a rare chance "gossip and drama"
whispers and knicks.
stabs and kicks.
awkards silences.
acconts of violence.
"you said what?"
"oh you little slut!"
she cried all day.
did you know he's gay?
steamed up romance and
messed up chances.
flunked a test,
a little over stressed.
broken hearts and she's
"way to smart!"
that's all for today tune in next time.
JJ
whispers and knicks.
stabs and kicks.
awkards silences.
acconts of violence.
"you said what?"
"oh you little slut!"
she cried all day.
did you know he's gay?
steamed up romance and
messed up chances.
flunked a test,
a little over stressed.
broken hearts and she's
"way to smart!"
that's all for today tune in next time.
JJ
Rare chance
here's a rare chance at least i think it is. i am going to write like little doodles for this poem i'm going to form so you get to see the work in progress. But don't steal it it's only a poem make it yourself if your so interested in poems then why are you on my site. if your only intention is to steal don't steal mine or anyone elses cause it's a crime and a block on creative society please don't.
JJ
JJ
Wednesday, December 26, 2007
silent choke
possesd scream,
silent chokes of
silent ghosts.
I tried to leave but that wasn't sucess.
she tried to escape the gasp and fear of choking on nothing.
but that didn't work either.
possed possesion of unwanted souls.
locked in a silent place
with silent walls.
but not that silent with them.
leaving was not a choice.
choice was a silent choke.
from a silent ghost.
now i choke silently.
and choke others without a choice.
silent chokes of
silent ghosts.
I tried to leave but that wasn't sucess.
she tried to escape the gasp and fear of choking on nothing.
but that didn't work either.
possed possesion of unwanted souls.
locked in a silent place
with silent walls.
but not that silent with them.
leaving was not a choice.
choice was a silent choke.
from a silent ghost.
now i choke silently.
and choke others without a choice.
Tuesday, December 25, 2007
Sorry
Sorry the poem temptation is posted so many times i was using a computer at school and it didn't show up so i kept posting now i relise it was posted!
JJ
JJ
Thursday, December 20, 2007
Temptation
Temptation is a sorry thing.
Temptation drove him up the wall.
Temptation killed a little kid.
Temptation hid the drugs.
it called and sung and called my name
beckoning with unforgiveable things.
I gave in once and felt the buzz of uncertainy and
insanity. Insanity of uncertain things. Racing with a
steady pace. Racing to win an unwinnable race.
breathing in invisable air sucking till the last of it was
gone. Pawing and clawing in nothing at all floating in
an reachable place. Blank was all it was. i knew i was
never to come down. Floating in a unreachable place
for never to return.
Temptation drove him up the wall.
Temptation killed a little kid.
Temptation hid the drugs.
it called and sung and called my name
beckoning with unforgiveable things.
I gave in once and felt the buzz of uncertainy and
insanity. Insanity of uncertain things. Racing with a
steady pace. Racing to win an unwinnable race.
breathing in invisable air sucking till the last of it was
gone. Pawing and clawing in nothing at all floating in
an reachable place. Blank was all it was. i knew i was
never to come down. Floating in a unreachable place
for never to return.
Temptation
Temptation is a sorry thing.
Temptation drove him up the wall.
Temptation killed a little kid.
Temptation hid the drugs.
it called and sung and called my name
beckoning with unforgiveable things.
I gave in once and felt the buzz of uncertainy and
insanity. Insanity of uncertain things. Racing with a
steady pace. Racing to win an unwinnable race.
breathing in invisable air sucking till the last of it was
gone. Pawing and clawing in nothing at all floating in
an reachable place. Blank was all it was. i knew i was
never to come down. Floating in a unreachable place
for never to return.
Temptation drove him up the wall.
Temptation killed a little kid.
Temptation hid the drugs.
it called and sung and called my name
beckoning with unforgiveable things.
I gave in once and felt the buzz of uncertainy and
insanity. Insanity of uncertain things. Racing with a
steady pace. Racing to win an unwinnable race.
breathing in invisable air sucking till the last of it was
gone. Pawing and clawing in nothing at all floating in
an reachable place. Blank was all it was. i knew i was
never to come down. Floating in a unreachable place
for never to return.
Temptation
Temptation is a sorry thing.
Temptation drove him up the wall.
Temptation killed a little kid.
Temptation hid the drugs.
it called and sung and called my name
beckoning with unforgiveable things.
I gave in once and felt the buzz of uncertainy and
insanity. Insanity of uncertain things. Racing with a
steady pace. Racing to win an unwinnable race.
breathing in invisable air sucking till the last of it was
gone. Pawing and clawing in nothing at all floating in
an reachable place. Blank was all it was. i knew i was
never to come down. Floating in a unreachable place
for never to return.
Temptation drove him up the wall.
Temptation killed a little kid.
Temptation hid the drugs.
it called and sung and called my name
beckoning with unforgiveable things.
I gave in once and felt the buzz of uncertainy and
insanity. Insanity of uncertain things. Racing with a
steady pace. Racing to win an unwinnable race.
breathing in invisable air sucking till the last of it was
gone. Pawing and clawing in nothing at all floating in
an reachable place. Blank was all it was. i knew i was
never to come down. Floating in a unreachable place
for never to return.
Wednesday, December 19, 2007
Suffacation
I hear the steps of people past.
The giggle of the little girls.
Shiver.
The dog used to run.
to and fro.
to and fro.
Booming voices chant about.
"join us"
"join us"
The candles flicker.
"on and out"
"on and out"
The noise is overwhelming in my ears chanting,
singing and calling me.
The hallway never ends.
Twists and Turns.
Twists and Turns.
am i in circles?
Blurring.
Blurs.
i scream, I shout!
Go away!
Go away!
They close on in. Sucking in the air.
Tightening encloses my lungs.
*gasp*
*gasp*
I am a person of the past.
The giggle of the little girls.
Shiver.
The dog used to run.
to and fro.
to and fro.
Booming voices chant about.
"join us"
"join us"
The candles flicker.
"on and out"
"on and out"
The noise is overwhelming in my ears chanting,
singing and calling me.
The hallway never ends.
Twists and Turns.
Twists and Turns.
am i in circles?
Blurring.
Blurs.
i scream, I shout!
Go away!
Go away!
They close on in. Sucking in the air.
Tightening encloses my lungs.
*gasp*
*gasp*
I am a person of the past.
Tuesday, December 18, 2007
Seeping
seeping through my pours.
i frantically search the drawers.
a jelaous rage has shadowed me.
he cheated.
he lied.
i know he eyed a couple of those girls.
i scream, i shout.
i doubt he'll ever come back again.
i feel strain against my eyes.
another wave hits and swallows.
leaving me gasping for air.
i push on through, frantic for a little breeze.
a grab the gun.
i feel the pressure seizing up my brain.
then it comes.
the black i yearned, the jelaous wave has gone.
i do not breathe i do not see i only hear the music.
i frantically search the drawers.
a jelaous rage has shadowed me.
he cheated.
he lied.
i know he eyed a couple of those girls.
i scream, i shout.
i doubt he'll ever come back again.
i feel strain against my eyes.
another wave hits and swallows.
leaving me gasping for air.
i push on through, frantic for a little breeze.
a grab the gun.
i feel the pressure seizing up my brain.
then it comes.
the black i yearned, the jelaous wave has gone.
i do not breathe i do not see i only hear the music.
Monday, December 17, 2007
music
dancing through oak paneled walls.
it calls my worn name.
i slip and slide inside my soul,
yearning for it's touch.
for it's long fingers to take me in and
hold me there forever.
never ever let me slip between it's grasp to dance with the music forever.
it calls my worn name.
i slip and slide inside my soul,
yearning for it's touch.
for it's long fingers to take me in and
hold me there forever.
never ever let me slip between it's grasp to dance with the music forever.
Sunday, December 16, 2007
yelling
yelling,
screaming,
scheming.
I want to escape this world.
shut the doors of my mind.
blind the scenes.
go away i say.
insistent speaking
insistent screaming.
go away i say.
black it all out.
screaming,
scheming.
I want to escape this world.
shut the doors of my mind.
blind the scenes.
go away i say.
insistent speaking
insistent screaming.
go away i say.
black it all out.
stack of letters
a stack,
of letters lay unopended
still and dust swallow words.
breath the scent of well worn paper. Cry the tears of sorrow gone.
read the words in messy type. live the story of long ago.
a love of always , gone forever sealed within the stack of letters.
Never ever, always forever.
I live in never ever sometimes
sometimes i love to live in always forever.
Life dosen't always work like that.
Never ever.
always forever.
chose between the two.
chasing dreams or
singing screams.
living in a pit of despair
or dancing around with long silky hair.
chose between the two they say.
with skies of gray or feeling the ocean spray.
never ever
always forever.
sometimes i love to live in always forever.
Life dosen't always work like that.
Never ever.
always forever.
chose between the two.
chasing dreams or
singing screams.
living in a pit of despair
or dancing around with long silky hair.
chose between the two they say.
with skies of gray or feeling the ocean spray.
never ever
always forever.
Saturday, December 15, 2007
Minds
(Random)
I think minds can divided in many groups. Like adult minds think differently, rationly or not, but adult minds can also be divided again into like the following: Kid consierate, wants whats best for you, learn the hard way, and self absored. Then there is like a childs mind, these minds are the most innocent and the least worrisome. But also can be damaged eaisly. Then teenagers (oh god there's alot of those) teenagers! Teenage minds: emo,good intention,a moral and good kid mind,bad intention,plain bad,bound to end up bad mind and many others. I chose to write this because i was observing people today and there are so many things to witness in people which is also i good inspration for poems. Yeah...
JJ
I think minds can divided in many groups. Like adult minds think differently, rationly or not, but adult minds can also be divided again into like the following: Kid consierate, wants whats best for you, learn the hard way, and self absored. Then there is like a childs mind, these minds are the most innocent and the least worrisome. But also can be damaged eaisly. Then teenagers (oh god there's alot of those) teenagers! Teenage minds: emo,good intention,a moral and good kid mind,bad intention,plain bad,bound to end up bad mind and many others. I chose to write this because i was observing people today and there are so many things to witness in people which is also i good inspration for poems. Yeah...
JJ
friends
a stab.
a kick.
a brutal flip.
a nasty word.
heard.
a slice.
a cry.
a nerve hit on.
a tear or two.
shed.
a point.
a nick.
a stab in the back.
bled.
a kick.
a brutal flip.
a nasty word.
heard.
a slice.
a cry.
a nerve hit on.
a tear or two.
shed.
a point.
a nick.
a stab in the back.
bled.
Stab
stab.
right where the aim shoud be
it was between you and me.
took it to my best friend.
told her it was the end.
i wanted you to admit.
you signed off and left me in a pit.
apology would have been nice.
but instead you took the slice.
hit a nerve.
blood and vain.
all for a stupid web page.
right where the aim shoud be
it was between you and me.
took it to my best friend.
told her it was the end.
i wanted you to admit.
you signed off and left me in a pit.
apology would have been nice.
but instead you took the slice.
hit a nerve.
blood and vain.
all for a stupid web page.
Wednesday, December 12, 2007
Friday, November 30, 2007
Wednesday, November 28, 2007
Decisions
Torn between two.
Lost in the sea of my brain.
Stop.
Think.
Ahhhhhh.
Confusin.
Desire.
Needs.
Wants.
Lost.
Found.
Now.
Lost in the sea of my brain.
Stop.
Think.
Ahhhhhh.
Confusin.
Desire.
Needs.
Wants.
Lost.
Found.
Now.
Saturday, November 17, 2007
Thursday, November 8, 2007
Saturday, November 3, 2007
Book girl
hey bookgirl, um you didn't enter the contest i only see your comment?? Where did you enter your poem?
JJ
JJ
Friday, November 2, 2007
Contest
Hey what about the contest! No entry's if someone dosen't enter soon i'll be very worried!
please if you come across this site enter the contest...
JJ
please if you come across this site enter the contest...
JJ
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
rough draft
ok so this is some more writing, for that poem
left you that day.
I feel for you in your heart and your pain
your hunger and thirst. I feel you
were cursed you were the greatest friend living
each moment with joy.
JJ
left you that day.
I feel for you in your heart and your pain
your hunger and thirst. I feel you
were cursed you were the greatest friend living
each moment with joy.
JJ
Rough Draft
Hey guys, ok well i'm going to post my rough draft ideas on here so you can see it in the workings. It's for a friend who was diganosed with a diease.
A heard the news.
it dosen't look good,
i shouldn't have left that one fatfal day
left you alone to pray
alone through it all
through the pain
and gray left you alone
that day
well that's a first verse what do you think? Do you have any suggestions? More on it later!
JJ
A heard the news.
it dosen't look good,
i shouldn't have left that one fatfal day
left you alone to pray
alone through it all
through the pain
and gray left you alone
that day
well that's a first verse what do you think? Do you have any suggestions? More on it later!
JJ
Monday, October 29, 2007
Hey all you Bloggers out there!!
Try on the spot writing like randomly writing four verses i'll do it know:
Love me for me
hug me like it means something
be there in times of need
love me.
ok i know cheesey but it's on the spot excersise of the brain (not proven but who could complain) so try it it's good for expression!!!!!!!
JJ
Try on the spot writing like randomly writing four verses i'll do it know:
Love me for me
hug me like it means something
be there in times of need
love me.
ok i know cheesey but it's on the spot excersise of the brain (not proven but who could complain) so try it it's good for expression!!!!!!!
JJ
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Contest
when leaving comments for entry, please put the title of your poem in the "title" spot thanks...
JJ
JJ
Writer's Block
Ok writer's block strikes at the worst of times!! Even if it's for a word, sentence or overall. But there's nothin you can do about it! So try a couple of these tips:
- Look at the book your reading does it have good sample emtions?
- Go outside and walk around think poetically about the things around you
- More tips later
JJ
Tuesday, October 23, 2007
Contest
I'm having a contest send in your poems and i'll read em'! If i like it you win!(prize is an sense of accomplishment) also you can be on my website!!! So send in your poems and let the creative mind write!!(please keep it PG : ))
Ideas,Ideas,Ideas
Ok so it's been like a minute and already i'm overflowing with ideas so let me now yours. For all those writers out there with writers block post some of your rough drafts and maybe i can help. You know you can trust me,
JJ
JJ
Poems
hey all you writers out there!! I created this site to help people find info or inspiration out there. So if you have a great topic for a poem or just want to post yours feel free!! Of course if it's apporiate. That means I will be checking all your posts to make sure there ok! So if your feeling writers block or need a tip just contact me JJ...
See all you writers out there,
JJ
See all you writers out there,
JJ
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