Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Rough Draft

Hey guys, ok well i'm going to post my rough draft ideas on here so you can see it in the workings. It's for a friend who was diganosed with a diease.

A heard the news.
it dosen't look good,
i shouldn't have left that one fatfal day
left you alone to pray
alone through it all
through the pain
and gray left you alone
that day

well that's a first verse what do you think? Do you have any suggestions? More on it later!

JJ

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