ok so this is some more writing, for that poem
left you that day.
I feel for you in your heart and your pain
your hunger and thirst. I feel you
were cursed you were the greatest friend living
each moment with joy.
JJ
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Rough Draft
Hey guys, ok well i'm going to post my rough draft ideas on here so you can see it in the workings. It's for a friend who was diganosed with a diease.
A heard the news.
it dosen't look good,
i shouldn't have left that one fatfal day
left you alone to pray
alone through it all
through the pain
and gray left you alone
that day
well that's a first verse what do you think? Do you have any suggestions? More on it later!
JJ
A heard the news.
it dosen't look good,
i shouldn't have left that one fatfal day
left you alone to pray
alone through it all
through the pain
and gray left you alone
that day
well that's a first verse what do you think? Do you have any suggestions? More on it later!
JJ
Monday, October 29, 2007
Hey all you Bloggers out there!!
Try on the spot writing like randomly writing four verses i'll do it know:
Love me for me
hug me like it means something
be there in times of need
love me.
ok i know cheesey but it's on the spot excersise of the brain (not proven but who could complain) so try it it's good for expression!!!!!!!
JJ
Try on the spot writing like randomly writing four verses i'll do it know:
Love me for me
hug me like it means something
be there in times of need
love me.
ok i know cheesey but it's on the spot excersise of the brain (not proven but who could complain) so try it it's good for expression!!!!!!!
JJ
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Contest
when leaving comments for entry, please put the title of your poem in the "title" spot thanks...
JJ
JJ
Writer's Block
Ok writer's block strikes at the worst of times!! Even if it's for a word, sentence or overall. But there's nothin you can do about it! So try a couple of these tips:
- Look at the book your reading does it have good sample emtions?
- Go outside and walk around think poetically about the things around you
- More tips later
JJ
Tuesday, October 23, 2007
Contest
I'm having a contest send in your poems and i'll read em'! If i like it you win!(prize is an sense of accomplishment) also you can be on my website!!! So send in your poems and let the creative mind write!!(please keep it PG : ))
Ideas,Ideas,Ideas
Ok so it's been like a minute and already i'm overflowing with ideas so let me now yours. For all those writers out there with writers block post some of your rough drafts and maybe i can help. You know you can trust me,
JJ
JJ
Poems
hey all you writers out there!! I created this site to help people find info or inspiration out there. So if you have a great topic for a poem or just want to post yours feel free!! Of course if it's apporiate. That means I will be checking all your posts to make sure there ok! So if your feeling writers block or need a tip just contact me JJ...
See all you writers out there,
JJ
See all you writers out there,
JJ
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